Friday 7 August 2020

writing 2

Hi bloggers.
Welcome back to my blog.
Today I have a piece of writing. This one is not as good as my other writing because it had more descriptive words in it .  However it is still pretty good.
 I learnt how to make my work  better. I made this piece of writing because my teacher (Ms Judd) said we have to do this writing so this is why am doing this blog post. The hard part was trying to find really descriptive words for this writing here it is     


She looked up at the dark cold fog and saw something in the sky. It was so bright just like the sun.

 hoped you liked it BYE!!!🐾😜

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