Hi
Welcome back to my blog. This blog is all about one piece of my writing, it is my favourite bit of my writing. We had to describe the picture
I hoped you liked it
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She saw the tree trunks that looked like big brown eggs in the dark cold forest.
As she stepped slowly into the circle
she felt nervous because the ground was as soft as a stuffed toy.
As she stepped slowly into the circle
she felt nervous because the ground was as soft as a stuffed toy.
Hi Mikayla!🐶
ReplyDeletePoppy here and I love the piece of your writing! But I really want to see the rest of the story. Can you post the whole thing? Keep up the good work!
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Poppy.🐴🐕🐈🐀🐥
Hi poppy
Deletesorry I can not show you the rest because we were just making sentences and that was mine blog you later
Hi Kayla Rita L here
ReplyDeleteI really like your Paragraph/sentence, It's really cool because you have used a lot of describing words this was my favourite part:She saw the tree trunks that looked like big brown eggs. That was my favourite part.It reminds my of my story that I wrote here is my blog if you wanna go see it
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Rita🐴🐴🐴🐴
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DeleteKia orana Mikayla,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mariam from room 25.
I love that poster.It looks amazing and in the same time interesting.
Hmm.I don't really understand when you said this in the story.she was nervous because the ground was as soft as a stuffed toy.Shouldn't she be cool?Did anyone inspired you?
BLog ya later
Hi Mikayla🌺😍
ReplyDeleteIts Rose from room 25 i think that it was really interesting and the tree trunks do look like big brown eggs and i have a question why was she nervous for wouldn't she feel safe if she trip's
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