Wednesday, 31 March 2021

My tunnel writing!🖨️⌨️

 Hello Bloggers!! Mikayla here.

Today we were doing writing. We were doing this writing about a tunnel. The hard thing about this was choosing your words. The easy thing about this was making something up in my writing. I hope you like it BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!🐯🐯🐯🐴🐶Mikayla🐶🐴🐯🐯🐯


As I walked down the forest and looked around the corner.Amazed I saw a shimmering waterfall. The waterfall sprinkled on the water.

It flowed down the stream.  The Air smelled of lavender and it swirled around me.

I looked over and saw a dark cloudy cave.

I wanted to explore so I went into the cave.

It was big at first but when I started going down it got smaller and smaller each

step I took.

Until I had to lay down on my tummy to get through the cave.

A bat jumped out of a hole in the cave. I felt like I had just had a heart attack. 

Then I saw cycrest clear water. It glowed.

I stepped in the water and kept on walking.

I looked under my feet and saw a cave underwater. I started to swim down.

I was out of breath slowly and I started to stop.

It got deeper and deeper till I could not touch the bottom.

Then I saw an opening. I used all my strength and got up.

Then the cave stopped. Then I could breathe. I felt so good I lay on the floor.

I looked at the roof and saw glittering diamonds. Was I in a dream?

I slapped myself on the face. OW!! I Yelled. I am not in a dream. 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Mikayla I really like you thinking and your writing and the under water cave and I like when you said you where in a dream and slap your self.

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  2. hi mikayla loved descripotion and how it end, what is the hardest thing about writting this great amazming story? did you ever get stuck? bye

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    1. Hi Lna!
      Thank you for the comment! The hardest thing was thinking about the ideas. No I have not got stuck. Have you ever done writing like this?
      Mikayla

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